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u/Deserteur3000 2d ago
Love your style! The last pages with the "drop" have a very good energy. The black background is a cool style choice as well.
Maybe, the only part I found a bit confusing was the second page. It's not quite clear to me where the protagonist is moving with repect to his environment.
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